Post by zenzal on Jan 14, 2013 0:01:33 GMT -5
what do you all think of this title and opening paragraph?
Final Fantasy: Kingdoms Divided by Blood
“The year of 490 under the reign of King Perlineus, the kingdom of Lenorus had begun their assualt on their brother kingdom,Lanorus by the infamous Emperor Aureleus. The war lasted 19 long years until the end of the year 509 when emperor Aureleus presented Perlineus with a “peace treaty” but in actuallty was the terms of Lanorus’ surrender, the end of Perlineus’ reign would end with the treaty being signed in blood.”