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Post by fujin on Jan 19, 2013 20:49:27 GMT -5
It was quiet. She had been waiting some time and was growing impatient. She never let on, but he was truly like a brother to her. A hyperactive, annoying, not-so-bright brother. They had grown up together aned she found it hard to bring herself to get angry at the muscular teenager.
She was brought out of her musings as a sound came from her pocket. Fishing, she read the object of her musings on the screen and frowned. Obnoxious and loud as always. Inside, she couldn't help but smile as she thought of his words, manner of speaking and general clumsiness. He was her brother, blood didn't count in this relationship. They had been through much together and things were bound to get worse. Her face could show no emotion to 99.9% of the general populace, but he would always be the one to see it, guaranteed, every time. Him and his incessant "ya know". She adored it, she really did. It was aggravating as all hell, but she loved it. It was him. And she couldn't get anything past him. Flipping open the phone, she grunted a greeting and listened, then grunted a response.
Thinking for a few moments, she swallowed and thought about things. "WORRIED. SAFE?'" she barked out, her throat wanted to ache from the speech, but it wasn't nearly enough to make it actually hurt. There was a response on the cellphone, but you couldn't make it out if you were next to her. She stared around at the wall in the hallway to the Training Center, not really seeing anything. The albino couldn't stop the sound of concern that left her. She still held feelings for the man, despite what he did to her so many years ago. "HIM?" There was another response. Fujin still wasn't comforted. Tomorrow was the day that Seifer went to Galbadia. If was without authorization of course. He was furious about not making SeeD. Fujin was scared at what would happen in this fit of rage - Seifer wanted to prove himself. She tried to stop him from leaving, but... She slammed her fist against the wall, not feeling the pain over the pain throbbing in her back.
When his name wasn't called he barely managed to keep himself together, stay composed, because that was what he was supposed to do. Professionalism is what he called it when they three went out to train on the Plains. As soon as they were safe away, he began screaming and raging and attacking every monster in sight. Eventually she and Raijin both had to use a multitude of Sleeps on him when a T-Rexuar bellowed from the depths of one of the forests that they were training in. He would have dashed right in there.
Normally she would have followed him into battle, but not like that. He wasn't thinking, he was raging and that was not something you should follow into battle. That was an easy, one-way path to death. Even if she did have Pandemona. It was simply a stupid thing to do. They three would have been killed in minutes. This however, she came back to the future, this was something that they couldn't do anything about except simply wait at Galbadia Garden for. Wait for him to report to them. Give them a sign. Something. Anything. She still cared, despite what he did to her eye, her voice. He was her only other friend. She was too much of a weirdo, a freak, what with her platinum hair, red eye and odd manner of speaking for anyone to want to get close to her. He was something to watch from afar, not something that you could hold and offer food to. He was dangerous. Almost unpredictable. She had learned that much several years ago. She far more guarded now than she was then. She had learned to watch. And wait. But he was one of the few that wanted her around, or at least tolerated her. She wasn't about to throw that away.
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Post by Snow Villiers on Jan 20, 2013 7:40:19 GMT -5
I'm peeetty uncomfortable with the godmodding here, as there's no Raijin for you to rely on while you're doing the actual thread-writing. It's gotta be aaaaall Fujin. I'm willing to let it pass, though, and leave it up to one of the other staffers whether they decide to ask you to change it or not.
You have one approval.
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Post by Lightning Farron on Jan 20, 2013 12:22:33 GMT -5
I was having the same feels as Kent on this one. The Godmoding seemed a bit extreme. If you would just please edit this out, and work around what was there it would make me much more comfortable with accepting you. It's a very good post, but it would be great if you could just fix this minor issue. Thanks.
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Post by fujin on Jan 24, 2013 13:55:34 GMT -5
Mrrr. It got shortened. I personally feel this is actually far better than what I had originally  Eek! Wait. Don't read it! Not yet! I forgot something! *Covers readers' eyes.*There! Finished! Had to correct a silly thing. But it's longer than my original edit but still shorter than the original post  |
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Post by Lightning Farron on Jan 24, 2013 14:01:48 GMT -5
Everything looks good to me. You've got my acceptance.
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Oerba Yun Fang
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"Yeah I've got a few screws loose, but I'm a l'cie, same as you."
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Post by Oerba Yun Fang on Feb 3, 2013 13:01:54 GMT -5
DENIED Due to your not completing this app within the ten allowed days, it will be denied and moved to the archives without the ability to have the staff move it again. We have a one time try with characters, so if you would like to make someone, it will have to be another character.
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